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Sun Blue

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The sun blue
It shine's so bright
And stars like eyes
in a garden of dreams
Where one by one
These stars all die
And soon your garden
Is nothing more
Than just a dream
And where you find yourself lost
Staring alone
Into the sun blue..
IM not sure what this is ... its something i just wrote...

I wish i could write better...
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pOeTiCtAsH's avatar
practice practice practice! i see this is a few years old have you written since these posts? the more you write the more you evolve and improve and learn and change...both yourself and your writing. its quite amazing,

great write

Tasha