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See i was ..
Walkin round' my,
mind today
and....
I saw her, oh and...
Damnnnnnnn she look so good
She Look , oh
She look sooooo damn gooood...
Maybe i could, oh
she look so good...
Maybe we could, oh
So damn gooood..
Maybe you and i, oh
damn shes good.
Shes oh so fine...
Damn
Shes oh so good.
Walkin round' my,
mind today
and....
I saw her, oh and...
Damnnnnnnn she look so good
She Look , oh
She look sooooo damn gooood...
Maybe i could, oh
she look so good...
Maybe we could, oh
So damn gooood..
Maybe you and i, oh
damn shes good.
Shes oh so fine...
Damn
Shes oh so good.
Its about meeting someone and falling for them..
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I am abandoning all my poetic knowledge and riding with you on this, I feel it.
may I just suggest to get your punctuation straightened out, especially in a poem like this where the flow and how it sounds is so very key in its delivery.
have fun, keep writing.
may I just suggest to get your punctuation straightened out, especially in a poem like this where the flow and how it sounds is so very key in its delivery.
have fun, keep writing.